Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday 5 July 2019
BOBBY-JOE
We have been learning to describe a character. To do this you need to write what they look like, their likes and dislikes and what they do. I enjoyed making up the character and getting all the descriptive words. What I found challenging was describing the character. I'v improved in my writing by writing better similes. Out of all the characters in the WHOLE WIDE WORLD what would you choose.
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