The Terrifying Tomb

WALT: write a narrative. We had four story choices, the choices were The Great Escape, The Tomb, The Mirror, and The Magic Ride. The part that I enjoyed the most was that we could basically make up our own story but it was based on the same thing so you could add in like Pokemon and that kind of stuff. The part that I found hard was editing my work because I had to click on all the words and look very closely so I didn´t miss anything. My next step is to make my starting more interesting by not using the same word heaps. The next thing that I want to right about is well..... ANYTHING! Time for my story.

Have You Ever Writ A Narrative.

                                   THE TOMB

 

It was a normal Saturday night on the plane to Egypt, but is wasn't a normal Saturday night because on the speakers the pilot said that we were in an emergency and that we were going to crash. But luckily there were parachutes under the seats so we used those to get down safely. When we got to ground level we realised that we were stranded in the middle of the desert! But in the distance we saw an Egyptian pyramid, and then we said to each other maybe there's a town over there! So we travelled all the way to the pyramid but there was no town, so we went inside the pyramid and it was about five hundred years old and there were about fifty traps so we knew it was hiding something. We looked up and down and all we saw was dust and spider webs. So we made a little camp by the pyramid. We camped for about two day, and then we tried to get through to the end of the pyramid and run through all of the traps and come out with the  treasure alive. We tried and tried but we couldn't do it. But we tried again and we got pretty far and a skeleton warrior ́s and zombies came out of the walls. So we got our torches and threatened them with it. They trapped us in a corner, but luckily a guy called Indiana Jones came and rescued us and got us out of the pyramid, and we eventually we rushed to an airport and got back home. The first night that we got home we heard a knock on the door in the middle of the night...