Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday 12 June 2020
Animal Friends!
We have been learning how to be a good friend. To be a good friend you have to do a lot of things. We have made a google drawing to show it. I got these animal pictures off the internet.
How did you make good friendship?
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Hi Fletcher its Miller, this is a quality blog post but if you fix the question and make it easier to answer then you could call it a 6 pointer. I would also work on the WALT it could be better honestly.
ReplyDeleteother than that your explaining is great and your DLO is ๐๐๐๐๐๐
Miller the yeet signing off๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Hi its Jayden I really like this post because it gives you a lot of information. I think the W.A.L.T could be better.
ReplyDeleteby the way the animals are really cute๐๐๐๐๐๐๐