WALT: Write a diary as if we were Timmy or Tilly the lambs.
This is Tillys diary.
BAAAAAAAA I have just woken up and NICK IS CARRYING ME AND TIMMY AWAY. Can´t I just get SOME SLEEP >:(. It is so uncomfortable in the car. What is this place? It's way bigger than the paddock. Guess I have to look around. Is this a classroom? There are a lot of kids here and it's pretty stinky and cramped. Ooooh Nick has a little area for me and Timmy. Oooooh Nicks letting us out what's here oooh a cable lemme just chew this oooh Timmys got a felt, luckyy. Let's go for a walk with Miller and Fletcher! I like room 4. It's very shady. PAPER YAY I LOVE PAPER ooh so yummm. I'M BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!
What was your favourite part?
your story is so cool
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