The Terrifying Tomb

WALT: write a narrative. We had four story choices, the choices were The Great Escape, The Tomb, The Mirror, and The Magic Ride. The part that I enjoyed the most was that we could basically make up our own story but it was based on the same thing so you could add in like Pokemon and that kind of stuff. The part that I found hard was editing my work because I had to click on all the words and look very closely so I didn´t miss anything. My next step is to make my starting more interesting by not using the same word heaps. The next thing that I want to right about is well..... ANYTHING! Time for my story.

Have You Ever Writ A Narrative.

                                   THE TOMB

 

It was a normal Saturday night on the plane to Egypt, but is wasn't a normal Saturday night because on the speakers the pilot said that we were in an emergency and that we were going to crash. But luckily there were parachutes under the seats so we used those to get down safely. When we got to ground level we realised that we were stranded in the middle of the desert! But in the distance we saw an Egyptian pyramid, and then we said to each other maybe there's a town over there! So we travelled all the way to the pyramid but there was no town, so we went inside the pyramid and it was about five hundred years old and there were about fifty traps so we knew it was hiding something. We looked up and down and all we saw was dust and spider webs. So we made a little camp by the pyramid. We camped for about two day, and then we tried to get through to the end of the pyramid and run through all of the traps and come out with the  treasure alive. We tried and tried but we couldn't do it. But we tried again and we got pretty far and a skeleton warrior ́s and zombies came out of the walls. So we got our torches and threatened them with it. They trapped us in a corner, but luckily a guy called Indiana Jones came and rescued us and got us out of the pyramid, and we eventually we rushed to an airport and got back home. The first night that we got home we heard a knock on the door in the middle of the night...

baptism

we are learning about the sacrament of baptism because the room 8 teacher Mrs Tyro got baptised  and I made a slide show about baptism. Have you ever been baptised?

BOBBY-JOE

We have been learning to describe a character. To do this you need to write what they look like, their likes and dislikes and what they do. I enjoyed making up the character and getting all the descriptive words. What I found challenging was describing the character. I'v improved in my writing by writing better similes. Out of all the characters in the WHOLE WIDE WORLD what would you choose.

We are learning to write persuasive arguments. We learned that everyone can like different things.🤔

But if your arguing you have to come up with three reasons why it is better than the other thing, and than after you have the choice to stay or go on the other team. Mine were beyblades. I made videos to try and make people buy them and battle them to see which beyblade is better. You can mix beyblades to try and make them better. There are hundreds to collect. You can buy them online for about five dollars or two. In shops you can buy them for about thirty-two dollars or twenty-five. You need a beyblade a launcher and a stadium and then battle with a friend. My favourite part was deciding on what I like better. Like live with my great great great grandchildren from the future or live with my great great great grandparents from the past. I did go to the past and meet my great great grandparents. What would you do?

Statistics is gathering information.

Statistics  is gathering information.

Bar graph.

A bar graph is used to gather information you get all of the info and you write the  options under the bar graph and do all of the votes above. Then on the edge right numbers one to whatever number you like but it has to a higher number with the the column with the most votes.

Pictogram.

A  pictogram is kinda like a bar graph you have to get all the information and everything. But when you write down the information you draw pictures instead of bars. So say that I was doing Pokémon I would draw Pokémon.

Tally Chart

A tally chart is another way to gather information. Every vote you draw one line. When you get to four lines and you put a cross through it.

My favourite part was gathering the information. The hardest part was probably doing everything really quickly. By Fletcher

We Are Learning About The Holy Spirit

We are learning about wairua Tapu - Holy Spirit.

We have learnt that pentecost is the birthday of the church.Peter and John healed a lame man at the temple with the Holy Spirit. The Holy Spirit gave the dicsiples the tongues of fire to  spread the word of Jesus. 

What do you now about pentecost?

The Blazing Holy Spirt

We have been learning about the holy spirit.
 Pentecost is the birthday of the church and the 50 days after Easter.
The tongues of pine came upon the  the disciples and they could speak all different languages to spread the word of Jesus.
The symbols of pentecost are water, fire, wind, and dove.

What do you now about pentecost?